Today you will spend some time reading your classmates blogs. As I have said before, it's no fun to keep a blog if no one is going to read it. Access at least three other people's blogs and comment on there ideas for the 20% Project. Your comments can include words of encouragement, questions, or even suggestions.
After you have finished reading and commenting on blogs, you will need to begin work on your Pitch Poster. Remember this is your plan for how you want to accomplish you're goal. You will use this as the visual in your Pitch Presentation. We will record our pitches on October 13 and then watch them the following week. You have today and next Friday to get your poster completed and practice making your pitch.
Let me know if you have any questions. :)
P.S. I have made several grammar mistakes in my blog post. See if you can locate them and comment below my post with the mistake and how to fix it.
Mrs. Germany
In the second paragraph, "you're" should be your
ReplyDeleteThere should be their in the first paragraph line 3
ReplyDeleteYou said "accomplish you're goal" when it should really be your goal
ReplyDeleteYou miss spelled your on paragraph 2 line you it you're it is your. Also you need to add a comma in the second paragraph line 4 before the first and.
ReplyDeleteYou have written "accomplish you're goal" but you are actually supposed to write "accomplish your goal".
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ReplyDelete1) classmates blogs - classmates' blogs
2) there ideas - their ideas
3) you're goal - your goal
?4) Pitch Presentation - pitch presentation?
Grammar mistakes fixed!
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday,
Today, (comma after "today") you will spend some time reading your classmate's ('s after "classmate") blogs. As I have said before, it's no fun to keep a blog if no one is going to read it. Access at least three other people's blogs and comment on their (change "there" to "their") ideas for the 20% Project. Your comments can include words of encouragement, questions, or even suggestions.
After you have finished reading and commenting on blogs, you will need to begin work on your Pitch Poster. Remember, (comma after "remember") this is your plan for how you want to accomplish your (change "you're" to "your") goal. You will use this as the visual in your Pitch Presentation. We will record our pitches on October 13th, (should be "13th", not "13", and add a comma after 13th) and then watch them the following week. You have today and next Friday to get your poster completed and practice making your pitch.
Let me know if you have any questions. :)
P.S. I have made several grammar mistakes in my blog post. See if you can locate them and comment below my post with the mistake and how to fix it.
The mistakes are
ReplyDeleteClassmates' blogs
Peoples' blogs
Their ideas
Your goal
There should be a comma after "Today," in the first paragraph.
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"People's" could be correct or incorrect; it depends on how you view it.
'Their ideas*,'not 'there ideas'
Remember,* (comma was not present after 'Remember,' though it should be)
"Your goal," not "you're goal."
Technically, in the second paragraph, the word 'then' in the sentence "...and then watch them the following week," is unnecessary.
'October 13th,'* not 'October 13.'
That's all I could find.
How to fix the mistakes:
ReplyDeleteClassmates should be changed to classmate's
Change there blogs to their blogs
Remember this is your plan... should be changed to Remember, this is your plan...
You're goal should be changed to your goal
Here are some of the mistakes that need to be fixed:
ReplyDeletethere blogs should be changed to their blogs
you're goal should be changed to your goal
Comma after reading and writing. This sentence becomes: After you have finished reading, writing, and commenting on blogs, you will need to begin work on your pitch poster
ReplyDeleteToday,
ReplyDeleteClassmates'
Comment on their
Your goal
Mistakes:
ReplyDeleteYour goals
Classmates' blogs
Comma after today
Comma after remember
Their ideas
I think I missed some... :/
A comma after today
ReplyDeletePeoples is supposed to be peoples'
There should be changed to their
Classmate must be classmate's
And you're goal should be your
Also, October 13 can have a "th" after ( 13th )
That's all I see!
Classmates'
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Remember,
Your
13th,
And,
Possibly pitch posters instead of Pitch Posters...
Peoples' in between classmates' and their
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ReplyDeleteClassmates'
ReplyDeleteYour goal
Comment on their
Remember, this is your plan
Commas to separate reading, writing, and commenting on blogs.
Comma after today
(13th,) not (13)
1. Change classmates blogs to classmates’ blogs.
ReplyDelete2. Instead of comment on there ideas it should be comment on their ideas.
3. Change accomplish you’re goal to accomplish your goal.
Classmates'
ReplyDeleteTheir
Remember, this is your plan
Your
October 13th
Mistakes:
ReplyDelete-Today,
-classmates'
-their
-your goal
-pitch presentation
-13th
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You're goals changed to your goals
Classmates blogs to classmates' blogs
October 13 to October 13th
Today you to today, you
There ideas to their ideas
- Change "classmates blogs" to "classmates' blogs"
ReplyDelete- Change "there ideas" to "their ideas"
Change "you're goals" to your goals
ReplyDeleteChange "classmates blogs" to classmates' blogs
Change "there ideas" to their ideas